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Old 05-13-2012, 07:34 AM   #1
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is verse are

In this sentence...


Each of these commands are given ...
Each of these commands is given ...


Are SOUNDS more correct to me then is, but does the "Each" make the singular use of "is" the correct one? This is for a formal article, not any of my fiction works.

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Old 05-13-2012, 07:49 AM   #2
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I don't think that I would notice anything amiss with either of those to be honest. Neither of them look glaringly wrong.

I think that I agree with you that "is" is more grammatically correct, but I wouldn't swear on it.
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Old 05-13-2012, 07:51 AM   #3
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'Each' is singular.

'of these commands' is (I believe) a prepositional phrase. A prepositional phrase will never contain the subject of a sentence. One can mentally remove it.

The result:

'Each is given.'

This leaves a singular subject with the attendant singular verb. They are now in agreement.



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Old 05-13-2012, 07:53 AM   #4
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'Each' is singular.

'of these commands' is (I believe) a prepositional phrase. A prepositional phrase will never contain the subject of a sentence. One can mentally remove it.

The result:

'Each is given.'

This leaves a singular subject with the attendant singular verb.



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That is what I was thinking, but "are" sounds more right. I think the "s" in commands is probably causing the "sounds right" check to fail.
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'Each' is singular.

'of these commands' is (I believe) a prepositional phrase. A prepositional phrase will never contain the subject of a sentence. One can mentally remove it.

The result:

'Each is given.'

This leaves a singular subject with the attendant singular verb. They are now in agreement.



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I concur!
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"Is" is grammatically correct, but "are" is absolutely fine, too, in the context of everyday English. Same with "none"; grammatically it's singular, but everyday usage frequently treats it as plural.

None of us is a great writer <--- grammatically correct
None of us are great writers <--- grammatically wrong, but popularly acceptable
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Old 05-13-2012, 08:03 AM   #7
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Sounds can definitely make a difference in determining how a possessive is marked, such as in names. For example, in the last names below

Sailers
Dickens


one would not normally write (as a singular possessive) this:

Sailers's
Dickens's


as it becomes a 'difficult word to pronounce. In my studies on this (when I was teaching Fussiness Grammar at a local business college - in addition to my high school English teaching), it becomes a matter of choice. Say the word Dickens's or Sailers'sout loud. It becomes readily apparent that they sound awkward.

Rather, what the 'experts' have stated is that one should write the singular possessive in this way (using specifically the two examples from above):

Sailers'
Dickens'

One is still referring to the singular possessive (as well as relying upon context, of course).
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one would not normally write (as a singular possessive) this:

Sailers's
Dickens's


as it becomes a 'difficult word to pronounce. In my studies on this (when I was teaching Fussiness Grammar at a local business college - in addition to my high school English teaching), it becomes a matter of choice. Say the word Dickens's or Sailers'sout loud. It becomes readily apparent that they sound awkward.

Rather, what the 'experts' have stated is that one should write the singular possessive in this way (using specifically the two examples from above):

Sailers'
Dickens'

One is still referring to the singular possessive (as well as relying upon context, of course).
This is actually a point on which "the authorities" disagree. There is a school of thought (including the "house style" of many academic journals) which says that for a proper name ending in "s", the "'s" should be added: thus "Dickens's novels". At the end of the day you either:

1. Do what seems best to you.
2. If submitting a paper to a journal, follow the rules that are required by that journal.
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The way we speak and the way we write are two different beasts.

Language is a 'living' thing, changing daily. Writing, on the other hand, takes a longer period of time for change to occur.

.....which is one reason we have slang. Ain't is not generally acceptable in educated circles and is looked upon with distaste. (And I'm exposing my own generational and educational bias here.) However, it is very much in acceptance in certain socio-economic areas of my country (USA) and, in many cases, represents a positive way in which individuals communicate.



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Hahahaha - Dear God! - I wrote 'Fussiness Grammar.'

Of course, I meant BUSINESS GRAMMAR!!!



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.....which is one reason we have slang. Ain't is not generally acceptable in educated circles and is looked upon with distaste. (And I'm exposing my own generational and educational bias here.) However, it is very much in acceptance in certain socio-economic areas of my country (USA) and, in many cases, represents a positive way in which individuals communicate.
Interestingly, the word "ain't" was an affectation widely adopted in "upper-class" British English in the early 20th century. You'll see this in the books of P.G. Wodehouse and Dorothy L. Sayers, for example. Both Bertie Wooster and Lord Peter Wimsey use "ain't" in their everyday speech.
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Interestingly, the word "ain't" was an affectation widely adopted in "upper-class" British English in the early 20th century. You'll see this in the books of P.G. Wodehouse and Dorothy L. Sayers, for example. Both Bertie Wooster and Lord Peter Wimsey use "ain't" in their everyday speech.

I didn't realize that.

In my country, it meant one lived in a trailer park and drove a pickup truck, and smoked Marlboro cigarettes. One's underwear had skid marks, and the picking of one's nose did not go unnoticed in polite circles.



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NOTE: Seriously, Harry, I wasn't aware of the cultural use of the word in British English society.
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Hahahaha - Dear God! - I wrote 'Fussiness Grammar.'

Of course, I meant BUSINESS GRAMMAR!!!



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HA! I think that slip up was very telling!
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NOTE: Seriously, Harry, I wasn't aware of the cultural use of the word in British English society.
Here's an example from "Whose Body" (the first "Lord Peter Wimsey" novel):

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He screwed his monocle into his eye, adding: ‘I see you’re troubled here with the soot blowing in. Beastly nuisance, ain’t it? I get it, too – spoils all my books, you know. Here, don’t you trouble, if you don’t care about lookin’ at it.’
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None of us is a great writer <--- grammatically correct
None of us are great writers <--- grammatically wrong, but popularly acceptable
Harry, remember the subforum on which you are posting, you could be more generous with your examples.

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Hahahaha - Dear God! - I wrote 'Fussiness Grammar.'

Of course, I meant BUSINESS GRAMMAR!!!
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HA! I think that slip up was very telling!
I didn't even think it was a slip!
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