Serve your sentence - a story of community

neil_swann80 · 04-16-2023, 02:33 AM

A simple premise - add one and only one sentence to further the story. Let's see where this goes!

As the ruckus from a nearby saloon spills out into the street our hooded quarry lurches from sight into an alley.

poohbear_nc · 04-16-2023, 01:56 PM

They curse heatedly when they realize they left their phone on the bar.

neil_swann80 · 04-16-2023, 02:15 PM

"You've been made, return to the safe house, we have his mobile device" I hear over my earpiece.

DNSB · 04-16-2023, 02:16 PM

The ground begins to shake and they fall to their knees.

neil_swann80 · 04-16-2023, 02:20 PM

A cacophony of car alarms, confused shouts and distant screams fill the air.

poohbear_nc · 04-16-2023, 03:40 PM

They looked up as a herd of Triceratops thundered by in a huge cloud of dust and debris.

Martinoptic · 04-16-2023, 05:28 PM

But, that was not all.

poohbear_nc · 04-16-2023, 06:24 PM

Harsh light suddenly illuminated the alley, as a low flying helicopter attempted to herd the unruly reptiles away from the town.

neil_swann80 · 04-16-2023, 11:47 PM

A rogue reptile thunders into the alley, the angry 8 tonne beast launches crates and garbage cans from its path during its panicked charge.

DNSB · 04-17-2023, 12:08 AM

Our hooded quarry is seen running down the alley just ahead of the dinosaur when a manhole cover flies open and a voice is heard shouting "Jump!".

neil_swann80 · 04-17-2023, 12:16 AM

As the target drops from sight I dive into a doorway landing hard, my head hitting brickwork and my vision darkens as I watch the colossus crashing by.

DNSB · 04-17-2023, 12:26 AM

As I leant against the door trying to maintain consciousness, the door opened, an arm reached out and snatched me inside.

neil_swann80 · 04-17-2023, 12:31 AM

As we fall into the bright safety of a noisy kitchen my vision fades into oily blackness.

DNSB · 04-17-2023, 12:49 AM

As my mind slipped from consciousness, that last thing I remembered was a strange musty scent.

neil_swann80 · 04-17-2023, 01:46 AM

Maybe a few minutes passed, or perhaps hours, as my mind slowly crawls back into consciousness, with a splitting headache I attempt to open my eyes.

04-16-2023, 02:33 AM	#1
neil_swann80 0000000000101010 Posts: 5,741 Karma: 11482159 Join Date: Mar 2023 Location: An island off the coast of Ireland Device: PB632 [HD3]	Serve your sentence - a story of community A simple premise - add one and only one sentence to further the story. Let's see where this goes! As the ruckus from a nearby saloon spills out into the street our hooded quarry lurches from sight into an alley.

04-16-2023, 11:47 PM	#9
neil_swann80 0000000000101010 Posts: 5,741 Karma: 11482159 Join Date: Mar 2023 Location: An island off the coast of Ireland Device: PB632 [HD3]	A rogue reptile thunders into the alley, the angry 8 tonne beast launches crates and garbage cans from its path during its panicked charge. Last edited by neil_swann80; 04-17-2023 at 12:11 AM.

04-17-2023, 12:16 AM	#11
neil_swann80 0000000000101010 Posts: 5,741 Karma: 11482159 Join Date: Mar 2023 Location: An island off the coast of Ireland Device: PB632 [HD3]	As the target drops from sight I dive into a doorway landing hard, my head hitting brickwork and my vision darkens as I watch the colossus crashing by. Last edited by neil_swann80; 04-17-2023 at 12:26 AM.

04-17-2023, 01:46 AM	#15
neil_swann80 0000000000101010 Posts: 5,741 Karma: 11482159 Join Date: Mar 2023 Location: An island off the coast of Ireland Device: PB632 [HD3]	Maybe a few minutes passed, or perhaps hours, as my mind slowly crawls back into consciousness, with a splitting headache I attempt to open my eyes. Last edited by neil_swann80; 04-17-2023 at 03:20 AM.

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04-16-2023, 01:56 PM	#2
poohbear_nc Now what? Posts: 61,078 Karma: 135181808 Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Durham, NC Device: Every Kindle Ever Made & To Be Made!	They curse heatedly when they realize they left their phone on the bar.

04-16-2023, 02:15 PM	#3
neil_swann80 0000000000101010 Posts: 5,741 Karma: 11482159 Join Date: Mar 2023 Location: An island off the coast of Ireland Device: PB632 [HD3]	"You've been made, return to the safe house, we have his mobile device" I hear over my earpiece.

04-16-2023, 02:16 PM	#4
DNSB Bibliophagist Posts: 40,631 Karma: 157444382 Join Date: Jul 2010 Location: Vancouver Device: Kobo Sage, Libra Colour, Lenovo M8 FHD, Paperwhite 4, Tolino epos	The ground begins to shake and they fall to their knees.

04-16-2023, 02:20 PM	#5
neil_swann80 0000000000101010 Posts: 5,741 Karma: 11482159 Join Date: Mar 2023 Location: An island off the coast of Ireland Device: PB632 [HD3]	A cacophony of car alarms, confused shouts and distant screams fill the air.

04-16-2023, 03:40 PM	#6
poohbear_nc Now what? Posts: 61,078 Karma: 135181808 Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Durham, NC Device: Every Kindle Ever Made & To Be Made!	They looked up as a herd of Triceratops thundered by in a huge cloud of dust and debris.

04-16-2023, 05:28 PM	#7
Martinoptic Bibliolater Posts: 5,880 Karma: 4147318 Join Date: Dec 2021 Location: England Device: none	But, that was not all.

04-16-2023, 06:24 PM	#8
poohbear_nc Now what? Posts: 61,078 Karma: 135181808 Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Durham, NC Device: Every Kindle Ever Made & To Be Made!	Harsh light suddenly illuminated the alley, as a low flying helicopter attempted to herd the unruly reptiles away from the town.

04-17-2023, 12:08 AM	#10
DNSB Bibliophagist Posts: 40,631 Karma: 157444382 Join Date: Jul 2010 Location: Vancouver Device: Kobo Sage, Libra Colour, Lenovo M8 FHD, Paperwhite 4, Tolino epos	Our hooded quarry is seen running down the alley just ahead of the dinosaur when a manhole cover flies open and a voice is heard shouting "Jump!".

04-17-2023, 12:26 AM	#12
DNSB Bibliophagist Posts: 40,631 Karma: 157444382 Join Date: Jul 2010 Location: Vancouver Device: Kobo Sage, Libra Colour, Lenovo M8 FHD, Paperwhite 4, Tolino epos	As I leant against the door trying to maintain consciousness, the door opened, an arm reached out and snatched me inside.

04-17-2023, 12:31 AM	#13
neil_swann80 0000000000101010 Posts: 5,741 Karma: 11482159 Join Date: Mar 2023 Location: An island off the coast of Ireland Device: PB632 [HD3]	As we fall into the bright safety of a noisy kitchen my vision fades into oily blackness.

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04-17-2023, 12:49 AM	#14
DNSB Bibliophagist Posts: 40,631 Karma: 157444382 Join Date: Jul 2010 Location: Vancouver Device: Kobo Sage, Libra Colour, Lenovo M8 FHD, Paperwhite 4, Tolino epos	As my mind slipped from consciousness, that last thing I remembered was a strange musty scent.