Silliness Final sentences

pshrynk · 01-08-2009, 10:32 AM

Okay, it was suggested, so here it is. The last sentence of your novel, short story, midnight raving lunacy, or whatever. And just to get it over with, i off the following:

The end.

The end?

The end!

The end...

And they all lived happily ever after?

And they all lived happily ever after.

And they all lived happily ever after!

And they all lived happily ever after...

Sweetpea · 01-08-2009, 10:35 AM

Then they left the ruins of the house, never to return again.

Though, I might write a second epilogue...

pshrynk · 01-08-2009, 10:38 AM

As the sun set over the Rockies, Percival turned to Slim and said, "Aren't we supposed to be in Arizona?"

BookishDreamer · 01-08-2009, 11:00 AM

The woman didn't even pause or glance around, her eyes determinedly focused on the car waiting at the end of the driveway, when a burning fragment of paper, the autographed title page of her former lover's embarrassingly revealing memoir, floated past her, instead allowing the warm heat on her back, the crackling and popping sounds, and the dappled flickering glow around her to confirm that the last vestiges of her old life were fully engulfed in a cleansing conflagration.

Dreamer

vivaldirules · 01-08-2009, 11:18 AM

Please, don't call me Ishmael again.

Steven Lyle Jordan · 01-08-2009, 11:58 AM

"Cheaters," he replied simply, "never prosper."

Steven Lyle Jordan · 01-08-2009, 12:02 PM

As the light waned, Sec-Bao muttered under his breath, "I guess I'd better get busy crafting that new light-sabre."

Steven Lyle Jordan · 01-08-2009, 12:06 PM

Finally resigned to his fate, he stubbed out his cigarette on the plastic seat next to him (because, at this point, what did it matter?), closed his eyes, and released the clutch...

lilac_jive · 01-08-2009, 12:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by vivaldirules

Please, don't call me Ishmael again.

MWAHHAHAHAHHAHAH!!!!

I need a new keyboard now, thanks.

Steven Lyle Jordan · 01-08-2009, 12:07 PM

"Vulcans," she replied simply, "never cheat."

Steven Lyle Jordan · 01-08-2009, 12:17 PM

"We really need to talk."

Steven Lyle Jordan · 01-08-2009, 12:34 PM

As the elevator doors closed, metaphorically as well as physically representing the last time he would ever see her, she threw him one, final, coy smile, a smile that seemed to say volumes, but that clearly started with the single phrase: "Check your pocket again."

(Hahn... hahn... drained... first and last... sentences... taken it all out of me... hahn... when did I get this old?... must... leave space for others...)

acidzebra · 01-08-2009, 12:43 PM

"What does this button do?"

GeoffC · 01-08-2009, 01:46 PM

"Oh! fer chrissakes, have it yer own way....."

GeoffC · 01-08-2009, 01:57 PM

"So this is hell; now where's the way out?"

01-08-2009, 10:32 AM	#1
pshrynk Beepbeep n beebeep, yeah! Posts: 11,726 Karma: 8255450 Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: La Crosse, Wisconsin, aka America's IceBox Device: iThingie, KmkII, I miss Zelda!	Final sentences Okay, it was suggested, so here it is. The last sentence of your novel, short story, midnight raving lunacy, or whatever. And just to get it over with, i off the following: The end. The end? The end! The end... And they all lived happily ever after? And they all lived happily ever after. And they all lived happily ever after! And they all lived happily ever after...

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Sweetpea Grand Sorcerer Posts: 9,707 Karma: 32763414 Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Krewerd Device: Pocketbook Inkpad 4 Color; Samsung Galaxy Tab S6	Then they left the ruins of the house, never to return again. Though, I might write a second epilogue...

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pshrynk Beepbeep n beebeep, yeah! Posts: 11,726 Karma: 8255450 Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: La Crosse, Wisconsin, aka America's IceBox Device: iThingie, KmkII, I miss Zelda!	As the sun set over the Rockies, Percival turned to Slim and said, "Aren't we supposed to be in Arizona?"

01-08-2009, 11:00 AM	#4
BookishDreamer Cultural Artist Posts: 1,128 Karma: 12829 Join Date: May 2008 Location: Georgia Device: Sony 505, Kindle 2	The woman didn't even pause or glance around, her eyes determinedly focused on the car waiting at the end of the driveway, when a burning fragment of paper, the autographed title page of her former lover's embarrassingly revealing memoir, floated past her, instead allowing the warm heat on her back, the crackling and popping sounds, and the dappled flickering glow around her to confirm that the last vestiges of her old life were fully engulfed in a cleansing conflagration. Dreamer

01-08-2009, 11:18 AM	#5
vivaldirules When's Doughnut Day? Posts: 10,059 Karma: 13675475 Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Houston, TX, US Device: Sony PRS-505, iPad	Please, don't call me Ishmael again.

01-08-2009, 11:58 AM	#6
Steven Lyle Jordan Grand Sorcerer Posts: 8,478 Karma: 5171130 Join Date: Jan 2006 Device: none	"Cheaters," he replied simply, "never prosper."

01-08-2009, 12:02 PM	#7
Steven Lyle Jordan Grand Sorcerer Posts: 8,478 Karma: 5171130 Join Date: Jan 2006 Device: none	As the light waned, Sec-Bao muttered under his breath, "I guess I'd better get busy crafting that new light-sabre."

01-08-2009, 12:06 PM	#8
Steven Lyle Jordan Grand Sorcerer Posts: 8,478 Karma: 5171130 Join Date: Jan 2006 Device: none	Finally resigned to his fate, he stubbed out his cigarette on the plastic seat next to him (because, at this point, what did it matter?), closed his eyes, and released the clutch...

01-08-2009, 12:07 PM	#10
Steven Lyle Jordan Grand Sorcerer Posts: 8,478 Karma: 5171130 Join Date: Jan 2006 Device: none	"Vulcans," she replied simply, "never cheat."

01-08-2009, 12:17 PM	#11
Steven Lyle Jordan Grand Sorcerer Posts: 8,478 Karma: 5171130 Join Date: Jan 2006 Device: none	"We really need to talk."

01-08-2009, 12:34 PM	#12
Steven Lyle Jordan Grand Sorcerer Posts: 8,478 Karma: 5171130 Join Date: Jan 2006 Device: none	As the elevator doors closed, metaphorically as well as physically representing the last time he would ever see her, she threw him one, final, coy smile, a smile that seemed to say volumes, but that clearly started with the single phrase: "Check your pocket again." (Hahn... hahn... drained... first and last... sentences... taken it all out of me... hahn... when did I get this old?... must... leave space for others...)

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01-08-2009, 12:43 PM	#13
acidzebra Liseuse Lover Posts: 869 Karma: 1035404 Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Netherlands Device: PRS-505	"What does this button do?"

01-08-2009, 01:46 PM	#14
GeoffC Chocolate Grasshopper ... Posts: 27,599 Karma: 20821184 Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Scotland Device: Muse HD , Cybook Gen3 , Pocketbook 302 (Black) , Nexus 10: wife has PW	"Oh! fer chrissakes, have it yer own way....."

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GeoffC Chocolate Grasshopper ... Posts: 27,599 Karma: 20821184 Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Scotland Device: Muse HD , Cybook Gen3 , Pocketbook 302 (Black) , Nexus 10: wife has PW	"So this is hell; now where's the way out?"