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Cutting It Fine - 1.5
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Planting the Flag - 1.4
I've uploaded a final version of Planting the Flag.
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Planting the Flag v1.4
I realize you've declared it final, but . . .-)
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The Road by the River v1-2
I've uploaded v1.2 of The Road to Dropbox. A bit of labor to get back into it.-)
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Cutting it Fine v1.5
This is a complete story and, to me, it looks almost done. However, I have found a few things . . .-)
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Hey folks, how's it going? It's been almost a month without updates. Let's hope we get some more stories from the pros here.
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Personally, it's going well; better than it has ever been in the last year. Regarding available time however, it's the worst time of my life.
Such is the result of the unemployed->employed switch, I suppose. Basically, everything but 'rebooting' my working life has been on hold for the last 6-7 weeks or so. I'm not forgetting this project, however. While there may never be an anthology because of lack of material, I will, at the earliest opportunity, critique the new(er) stories and versions, and resume the rewrite of my own story. I expect that this will be somewhere at the end of this month. Last edited by Katsunami; 06-05-2014 at 04:33 PM. |
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